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Old 30-Apr-2008, 10:35
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Exclamation Re: Proof readers!

Does anyone fancy reading my essay

It is just short of a 1000 words and is about the midwives knowledge of laction and how it can facillitate a woman to breastfeed


I feel it's a bit disjointed! But what do I know

I'm now off to find pictures to put in
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