hello. this is what i have come up with although it is plenty more than 70 words so need to shorten it abit i think?
any comments/advice would be fab! thanks!

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I am applying to study the Access to Nursing, Health and Science course as I have a keen interest in the growth and development of the human body and also the reproductive system.

Upon completing the course I would like to go on and apply to study a degree in Midwifery.

Midwifery is very interesting to me as I feel that every woman deserves the best care throughout all pregnancy stages.

I feel I have the qualities needed to study Midwifery as I am an understanding, patient and caring individual who has the ability to listen to people without prejudice and allow them to form their own opinion and be supportive of their decisions.

Therfor I feel that the Access Course will help me to gain experience in learning and i will gain alot of confidence and knowledge of the human body which will then help me to go forward and apply to Hull University and earn a degree in Midwifery.

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thanks for everyones help? any suggestion on this draft i would reeeeeeeelly appretiate. thank-you xx