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Old 28-Jun-2008, 22:01
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Helloo!
I have just finished the 1st draft of my PS, after weeks of trying!
I really need some constructive criticism/ feedback/ thoughts!
So if anyone would be willing to have a looksy over it for me, I would be eternally grateful!!

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I'll have a look if you like.
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Aw thanks very much coffeebean, would be a great help.
Shall I put it on here? Or PM it (or whatever it's called!!!)?
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you can do either lovely!!
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Ha ha, ok!
I'll write it on here, show myself up!!
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Actually I'll PM it, just in case its real bad.
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Okay!! I'm sure it won't be bad. Remember it is a personal statement about you. I wrote mine and then amended it about 5 times before I was happy to send it.
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Hi If you want a second opinion i will have a look xx
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Thanks sooz, will send it ya now ok? x
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Hi Sara, just in case you would like anyone else to take peak, I can :-) I wrote & re wrote mine several times my first copy was nothing like my last! But it did really help me to get others opinions on it xxx
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