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Old 30-Jun-2008, 21:14
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Hi All,

Can anyone spare some time to read through my PS. Im applying to Brighton for 2009 intake.

Ive probably re-written it about 25 times so far!!!!!

I need some feed back...............good or bad!!!

Be gentle with me!!

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Hi jo

PM it to me and I will take a look if you like. I am starting Brighton this september, having got in on the first go so any help you need just ask

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Oh Susie, Ur a star!!! Thank you!!

Take no notice of spelling, grammar, or punctuation @ this stage. Its just content really.

Well done for getting a place 1st time round!!!
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pm to me as well if you want hun, i'll have a gander for you xxx
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Thanks Kimmie,

U2 r a star!!!!

will PM it to you asap.

Thank you!! and bear in mind this is onlt 1st draft.
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Would be happy to take a gander. I loved doing mine and love writing so if you think I can help feel free to PM me. I promise to be honest but kind!
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I will willingly take a look if you would like me too and i promise to be nice!!!!

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