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Your more than welcome, it is really worrying isn't it? Did I put the right info in, have I made a complete mess of it, is it good enough???? lol.

But, hey you got a place so you did really well, and that is down to your personal statement in part.

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Thanks everyone, these are rreally good PS' and its really kind of you to post them to help others. I found mine the other day but its a paper copy, will post it up when Ive got a min to type it out

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Would someone be willing to look at my personal statement if I emailed it over to them? I don't want to post it because it is a first draft and needs changing an awful lot I would say but I would just like an opinion to make sure I am on the right track or have made a half decent start...? It is actually for my communications assessment - we have to do one - I am hoping if I can change it a bit and add to it I can get a good statement and use this for when I apply in Sept 08. Anyone willing to rip it to shreds...go on I can take it! :-)

I am happy to have a look at it for you, and I promise not to rip into too many shreds lol.

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Hi - thank you! Please bear in mind it is first attempt and I know it needs to be moved around and stuff but as I am doing distance learning I am sorta on my own and need someone else's view. I am won't be offended and just want open honest opinions as to how I can move this forward xxx

Ok, now where do I send it to and it is on Microsoft Word Processor not Word... is this ok?

Lisa xx

I just sent you it via private message but I had to do it in two messages as it was too long! ha ha let me know what you think - I am desparate to know I am sitting here waiting lol!!

Got it, I will read through it and get it back to you, but please bear with me a little bit as I am in the middle of an assignment and presentation at the moment lol. Will be as quick as I can though.

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Ah thank you very much. I hope your assignment and presentation are going well.

Thanks again.

Lisa x

Hi Lisa,

No problem.

The assignment is going ok thanks, haven't really started my presentation yet, but part of it is on the same topic as my assignment, so I thought that maybe when I have finished my assignment I will have a good basis for the first part......in theory at least lol.

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